An Even Dozen
Stunned Looking Back At This Week…
I can say for certain that these twelve short stories would not exist without this challenge. Not a chance on the planet.
And so far, Kris has said all of the first eleven work and are good, which surprises writer-me even more. Not supposed to happen that way in my head, which goes to show that even I still fight the old myths about writing at times.
But this challenge, with my work schedule this week, has knocked some of those old myths into the bleachers, never to return.
Got up around eleven because I had an appointment for a conference call meeting at 12:30 and wanted to be awake. Also got scheduled after the conference call someone to pick up our baby grand piano to sell it on consignment. It is in mint shape and a Baldwin about 20 years old. Kris is pretty darned good on it but no more room for it, sadly.
Then I headed to WMG offices to work on workshops and do another test run or two on the webinar stuff. It’s going to be fun. I will have the link to get into the webinar on Sunday in the response letters to anyone who turns in an assignment for one of the two workshops, plus on the site on the assignment page for Week #1. Don’t expect those links until Saturday.
Also got out to the bookstore to tear down a few walls in one of the new rooms we are remodeling and expanding for indie press books. We are getting closer, so hold on there. Kickstarter backers should have gotten surveys. But I needed to have that wall down because we have two guys and a truck coming to do a garbage run to the dump so the work can really start.
Then I went for a walk with a friend. Holy smokes am I out of shape. I ended up with only six thousand steps today total and thought I was going to die a few times on the walk. That is important on this move to get back in shape as I go or I won’t make it through the two months of moving all this stuff.
Maybe knocking down a couple walls tired me out as well. No matter what the television programs say, demolition is hard work.
Back to WMG for a time to work. Then I went out to a late lunch for me, dinner for them, with two friends which was wonderful, then back to WMG to keep working.
I got back to the house again late and did email for a time, then got something to eat and watched television, then more workshop stuff, then finally got to writing at 1 a.m.
I grabbed my half-title sheets to look for half-titles to trigger me. Found a half-title that was “… Got Colder.”
I figured that was enough, typed it in, and started with the first line about turning off the electricity to a house.
Went back and put in “A Bryant Street Story” under the title and went back to typing.
I did 1,100 words by 1:45 a.m. and took a short break to get some peanut butter, since I had peanut butter in the story.
Then I came back and finished it by 2:30 a.m. at exactly 2,050 words.
One really depressing story. I got to start giving myself more time to write stories so I don’t write these short, depressing Bryant Street stories.
I changed the title in the end to “Everything Got Colder.”
I’ve explained these before, but got a couple questions about them today, so thought I would explain them again as triggers.
I have a massive and almost complete collection of digest magazines of science fiction and mystery from the first digest in 1943 Astounding to the turn of the century. A ton of digests with a ton of duplicates. (Anyone looking for a full run of F&SF Magazine, almost mint? I have two. It will not be cheap to buy or ship. (grin))
So I randomly pick out ten or so digests from a certain magazine in a certain year. Then with a yellow legal pad, I start writing down lists of half-titles from the table of contents.
Only half-titles. Never full ones. Phrases, words, and so on.
I have two columns of them on every legal page of paper.
I do this from random decades and random magazines, from Ellery Queen to Super Science Stories.
Then I simply sit down at my writing computer to tell my creative brain it’s time to go play, then I look at the lists and if some phrase catches me, I try to smash it into another half title.
I have been doing this for decades and decades. I still have the sheet, ink faded, that has crossed off “In the Shade… and “…Slowboat.” Smashed those two together to get “In the Shade of the Slowboat Man” which is a story I have made upwards of twenty grand on over the years.
So when I say half-title sheets, that’s what I mean. Anyone can set up their own. I saw some nifty half-titles in an Esquire Magazine the other month.
Day One… Scared Money… 2,700 words…. Total April words… 2,700 words.
Day Two… Rainbow Peak… 4,900 words…. Total April words… 7,600 words.
Day Three… A Beautiful History… 2,300 words…. Total April words… 9,900 words.
Day Four… A Song For The Old Memory… 2,050 words…. Total April words… 11,950 words.
Day Five… A Brush with Intent… 1,000 words…. Total April words… 12,950 words.
Day Six… Ghost Diet… 2,700 words…. Total April words… 15,650 words.
Day Seven… Rescue Two… 3,300 words…. Total April words… 18,950 words.
Day Eight… The Woman Who Knew The Time… 3,200 words…. Total April words… 22,150 words.
Day Nine… Long Hair Henry… 4,400 words…. Total April words… 26,550 words.
Day Ten… I’ll See You… 1,500 words…. Total April words… 28,050 words.
Day Eleven… Girl on the Bed… 2,000 words…. Total April words… 30,050 words.
Day Twelve… Everything Got Colder… 2,050 words…. Total April words… 32,100 words.
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Two cats, one picture. Kris sent this to me of our boys laying together in the sun in our condo in Vegas.
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Good to see the guys together. They look content.
Might try that half title thing if needed. Picked up some Rory Story Cubes and a set of action cubes back in January when I was doing the short story challenge. I would grab three or four story cubes and maybe a couple action cubes and roll them together and try to work something out. Sometimes I would use most of them or just a couple. Great exercise and good joggers for getting the words flowing when I was stuck.
Sometimes I come across short story titles while going about my daily business. One day, I heard someone I work with tell someone else that they “used to be Alice.” I thought that was an odd thing to say and it got me wondering why anyone would ask someone such a weird question. Also it conjured up creepifying Wonderland imagery (for me). I emailed myself the title “You Used to Be Alice” and a few days later I had a story.
I had another story title a few weeks ago when my 4 year old son told me a story about a Tummy Man who lives in the woods, eats garbage and gives birthday parties at the bottom of a pool. Tip for horror writers – kids often tell surreal and creepifying stories). I quickly emailed myself the words The Tummy Man.
Now I email myself titles quite often. I think it’s fun.
Ahh, great fun, Cynthia. And great titles.
very interesting this challenge. I take this opportunity to ask you a question about which I would like your opinion : It is often said that to be a good writer you have to read a lot, do you agree with that?
Do you read a lot or did you read a lot in the past? because I have the impression that your present life does not leave you much time to read.
Thank you in advance for your reply.
Oh, constantly reading all the time. This last week not a lot of time, but I never much talk about what I am reading on my blog. Not into giving reviews and that sort of thing and doing that would be like giving a review. And I only read what I love, so if a book doesn’t grab me, I don’t bother. I also read a ton for the workshops and still have short story challenge stories from March 1st I haven’t read yet and am looking forward to finishing. So yup, that is a complete honest thing about reading a lot. I know of no professional writer who doesn’t read pretty much everywhere all the time in one form or another.
Thank you Dean for your answer
Linda Maye Adams
I’m amazed at the length of the stories you’re writing, and I mean that in a good way. Everything I write these days seems to go longer than I anticipate. The last “short” story I wrote clocked in at 3,800 words. I just looked over the proof for my next (really short) story for Pulphouse, so I know i can do that. I think my brain just glomps onto bigger ideas now that take more words to tell. Or else I’m really enjoying the whole depth thing and haven’t quite figured out how to be succinct with that. *g*
The kitties sure look like they’re settling in. 🙂
How to write shorter stories…? Be very, very tired and only leave yourself a short number of hours. Creative Voice just wraps them up nicely. (grin)