I had a good question on how you find a first reader, and what is the difference between a first reader and a workshop.
First it would be important to understand what a first reader does, so let me start there.
– A first reader reads your story when you feel it is ready to go out to an editor. (Never before.)
– A first reader reads for pleasure to see how the story works to a general reader.
– A first reader stops the author from mailing a story that might be wrong in execution or too many craft issues.
– Some first readers copyedit a manuscript, but not a critical feature of first reading unless you have trouble with typos and such as I do.
So, what makes a good first reader?
— The good first reader must understand and like your style and voice.
— The good first reader must look forward to reading your next story.
— The good first reader must be able to stand up to you and tell you a story doesn’t work, and exactly why, when given the chance to explain. And must be as excited for you as you are when a story really works.
— The good first reader does not have to be a writer, but must love reading.
— The good first reader must not have any agenda of their own to place on your work.
So, with all that, how do you find a good first reader?
Simple answer. You don’t. They are not just out there waiting for you to come along and pluck like some fruit. Any good first reader takes some training. But you have to find a person who has the interest to be trained and is a reader. And this person needs to be willing to stick with you for the long run.
So let me talk about ways to find that person who might be trained.
Back to where this question came from. Writers’ workshops are a great place to find a first reader. I met Kris at a writers’ workshop. Over the years, Kris and I have taught many professional level workshops, and what often is the top thing that comes from professional writers getting together is finding that first reader who can be trained.
This week we start what we call a Master Class, basically a boot camp for newer professional writers to help them jump their writing and their business knowledge years and years forward. The writers who are showing up here today and tomorrow are committed. They paid money for the workshop, carved two weeks out of their lives, left jobs, and got here to learn. They are already successes in many ways and just having that attitude is the reason why. They are willing to go and learn.
What will happen when these 16 very, very driven people get together these next two weeks is that some of them will like what some of the others are saying about story. And those will gather together and get to know each other, even though they are from different corners of the planet. In the five previous master classes many first readers have been found by other writers in their same class. Like-minded driven people willing to read other fiction.
A second place to find a great first reader is across the kitchen table from you. Often your spouse, with work and understanding, can be trained to be a fine first reader. There is a reason the two of you are together in the first place, so the basics of liking each other are there in most cases. Often it just takes an invite by the author to start getting the spouse involved in both the business side of things and the reading. But remember, the spouse does not know as much about writing as you do and is not as passionate about it. But they are a great audience.
And if they hate what you are writing and you are not selling, you might want to give their opinion some weight and ask them exactly what they hate and why.
So, can you use a workshop as a first reader? Sure. Over the years I did that a great deal. But there are some really important ways you must approach a workshop if you want them to do this for you.
– You must ignore 95% of the crap that comes at you, only listening to the people in the workshop you respect, and then only a part of that.
– You must only look at them as an audience, and ignore anyone who is always negative, workshop after workshop. Workshops breed those kind, and they are not worth your time.
– You must never think you are taking a story to a workshop to get it fixed.
– You must learn how to judge audience reaction. For example, if your workshop splits on your story, with half hating it and half defending it, you more than likely have an award winner. Don’t touch a word, just mail it.
One other point about first readers. Writers often train two or three. I only have one, but I have complete trust in my first reader. After all, she’s a Hugo Award winning editor and a Hugo Award winning writer. What’s not to trust?
There is a ton more about first readers and using a workshop as a first reader, but the best thing a professional level workshop can do for you is help you find other driven writers at your level. Find one.
And by the way, there are some things Kris just doesn’t read of mine. For example, I am doing a rescue book right now, ghost writing a novel. She won’t read that one because I am imitating another writer’s voice and she would not be able to tell where I screwed up or was doing something intentionally. So understand your limits on your first reader as well. If they hate romance and you write one, might want to just let them pass on that one.
Good luck. I am now off to spend two wonderful weeks with 16 highly motivated professional writers talking nothing but writing and the business of writing. No politics. Nothing but writing.
I am walking into heaven. I’ll be back in the real world eventually.
Cheers, Dean